Haiku Challenge

Back on the beach

Sand between my toes
Crashing waves to frolic in
It's good to be back

Okay folks, there's my haiku. I don't think it will win any awards or move anyone to tears, but writing in such a structured way can be fun from time to time. Now have your go at it. Any comments to this post should be posted in haiku format (5/7/5). Have fun!
Wednesday November 15 2006File under: poetry, travel

Toggle Comments (15)comment?
on Wed 15th Nov, 2006 04:58 pm UTC Trista said:
Well now, nice haiku. I just want to ask you this, Can you limerick?
on Wed 15th Nov, 2006 08:04 pm UTC Saxtor said:
Wren is on a beach.
I'm behind an LCD.
At least it's fall here.
on Wed 15th Nov, 2006 09:31 pm UTC sweet julie said:
working all nite sucks one diurnal creature, me whale season soon!
on Wed 15th Nov, 2006 09:49 pm UTC Saxtor said:
If you need line breaks
Put this after your stanzas
< br >, no spaces.
on Wed 15th Nov, 2006 11:20 pm UTC nathan said:
u r back so soon?
anacortes or thailand?
what will you do now?
on Wed 15th Nov, 2006 11:22 pm UTC nathan said:
btw, saxtor
not sure bout u'r last stanza
can u clarify?
on Thu 16th Nov, 2006 04:40 am UTC Mom said:
Here's some news from home. A storm knocked out the power. Candlelight haiku.
on Thu 16th Nov, 2006 07:57 am UTC Horge said:
Where are you now, Wren?
Japan's famous for their haikus,
But don't know their beaches.

on Thu 16th Nov, 2006 01:04 pm UTC Wren said:
I'm back in Thailand.
What a funny thing to say
This "back in Thailand"
on Thu 16th Nov, 2006 01:09 pm UTC bob said:
dude, wren, you appear
to be pinching a fat loaf
in your favicon
on Thu 16th Nov, 2006 09:07 pm UTC jenelle said:
i miss copious
vitamin d synthesis
mail me some, would you?
on Thu 16th Nov, 2006 10:25 pm UTC Saxtor said:
Consumer Alert:
Counterfeit vitamin D
direct from Thailand.

on Fri 17th Nov, 2006 03:04 am UTC Andrew said:
Comments? Comments? What?
I will write no poetry,
For your laziness!
on Sat 18th Nov, 2006 04:59 am UTC trista said:
big weekend for me
shaved my legs, finished reading
my legs feel naked.
on Tue 11th Jan, 2011 09:09 am PST Aurora said:
soaring my wings
to the land of voodoo dreams
travel tales to tell

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